She LIVES!

January 13.  Where does the time go?  Seems like only yesterday it was November 26, the day I COMPLETED MY FIRST DRAFT. Life has been a blur since then, what with the holidays and myriad of other activities that helped me forget (or at least granted me temporary amnesia) that I had spent a month pounding out 50,000 words.

The first draft is done.  Somehow, despite not having the faintest idea how I was going to tie up the myriad strands of my story, I managed to deal with my red herrings, double the tension and finally resolve everything into a rather tidy ending. Finally, 94,500 words later, I got to type the magical words “The End” and close my laptop for a well deserved rest.

Well, nap time is over folks. I have a second draft and (GULP) edits to conduct.  That starts with a full read through. Page 1 to page 447.  To aid in the process, my darling husband Jim printed out the full manuscript this evening.  Isn’t my baby pretty?

firstdraftcover

Now, the brutal part:  to cut out the dead wood and add the essential descriptions that make my story shine.  I head off into the ominous evening armed with two weapons:  my red pen and the belief that I can do this.

It is a daunting and scary process.  I think I did a good job on the first draft.  At the risk of sounding unbearably pompous, I think have the makings of a damn fine gothic Victorian novel:  blackmail, secrets, death and forbidden love…plus enough red herrings and plot twists to keep the reader interested until the end.

But first I need to refine it. My baby is a diamond in the rough.  She is not ready for her introduction to society.

Time for finishing school.

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  1. [...] I had the honor of printing and binding the first draft of my wife’s second [...]

  2. Congrats Robin! Can’t wait to give it a read!


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